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This article is a stub and could use additions. ''Comrade [[Comrade:ProletFlag|ProletFlag]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:ProletFlag|talk]])</sup> 20:17, 21 March 2022 (UTC) | This article is a stub and could use additions. ''Comrade [[Comrade:ProletFlag|ProletFlag]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:ProletFlag|talk]])</sup> 20:17, 21 March 2022 (UTC) | ||
== Improvements == | |||
I had added a new paragraph with one sentence stating that the class interests of a proletarian conflict with those of the bourgeoisie. However, this could benefit from further explanation and citing of sources below to elaborate on this. ''Comrade [[Comrade:ProletFlag|ProletFlag]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:ProletFlag|talk]])</sup> 20:30, 21 March 2022 (UTC) | |||
:There could also be a benefit in either adding a new section or creating a new article to describe the lumpenproletariat social class. This is of course irrelevant to my prior point. However, what would most probably be the most beneficial is making an article entirely dedicated to the lumpenproletariat as a social class. ''Comrade [[Comrade:ProletFlag|ProletFlag]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:ProletFlag|talk]])</sup> 20:32, 21 March 2022 (UTC) | |||
== Recent edit of mine == | |||
I had started a new paragraph with the first sentence: "The interests of the proletarian are in conflict with those of the bourgeois." do note the use of the singular form "proletarian" was purposeful on my part and was intentional entirely as I was referring to a singular proletarian, and the singular form "bourgeois" instead of bourgeoisie was also intentional as I was referring to a singular proletarian versus a singular member of the bourgeois class such as the conflict between an employee and employer. ''Comrade [[Comrade:ProletFlag|ProletFlag]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:ProletFlag|talk]])</sup> 20:23, 14 April 2022 (UTC) | |||
Latest revision as of 20:24, 14 April 2022
Stub[edit source]
This article is a stub and could use additions. Comrade ProletFlag (talk) 20:17, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
Improvements[edit source]
I had added a new paragraph with one sentence stating that the class interests of a proletarian conflict with those of the bourgeoisie. However, this could benefit from further explanation and citing of sources below to elaborate on this. Comrade ProletFlag (talk) 20:30, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- There could also be a benefit in either adding a new section or creating a new article to describe the lumpenproletariat social class. This is of course irrelevant to my prior point. However, what would most probably be the most beneficial is making an article entirely dedicated to the lumpenproletariat as a social class. Comrade ProletFlag (talk) 20:32, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
Recent edit of mine[edit source]
I had started a new paragraph with the first sentence: "The interests of the proletarian are in conflict with those of the bourgeois." do note the use of the singular form "proletarian" was purposeful on my part and was intentional entirely as I was referring to a singular proletarian, and the singular form "bourgeois" instead of bourgeoisie was also intentional as I was referring to a singular proletarian versus a singular member of the bourgeois class such as the conflict between an employee and employer. Comrade ProletFlag (talk) 20:23, 14 April 2022 (UTC)