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== Encyclopedic vs. essay tone ==
== Encyclopedic vs. essay tone ==
Comrade, some of your works read like an essay in our main articles, such as [[Republic of Cuba]] and [[People's Republic of China]]. Try to follow a more objective and encyclopedic tone in your writings. Thank you. — ''Comrade [[Comrade:FelipeForte|FelipeForte]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:FelipeForte|talk]])</sup> 06:37, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
Comrade, some of your works read like an essay in our main articles, such as [[Republic of Cuba]] and [[People's Republic of China]]. Try to follow a more objective and encyclopedic tone in your writings. Thank you. — ''Comrade [[Comrade:FelipeForte|FelipeForte]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:FelipeForte|talk]])</sup> 06:37, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
::A lot of the essay tone is actually from [[Comrade:Flesh_eating_turtle|Flesh eating turtle]]. But either way the text is very helpful, the tone is the only issue. — ''Comrade [[Comrade:Spookfessor|Spookfessor]]'' <sup>([[Comradeship:Spookfessor|talk]])</sup> 06:49, 27 May 2021 (UTC)

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Encyclopedic vs. essay tone

Comrade, some of your works read like an essay in our main articles, such as Republic of Cuba and People's Republic of China. Try to follow a more objective and encyclopedic tone in your writings. Thank you. — Comrade FelipeForte (talk) 06:37, 27 May 2021 (UTC)

A lot of the essay tone is actually from Flesh eating turtle. But either way the text is very helpful, the tone is the only issue. — Comrade Spookfessor (talk) 06:49, 27 May 2021 (UTC)